Oh wow. So beautiful! I loved the flow of the poem, and definitely adored the title. The words, were just superb.

awesome pattern, i really like the beat. a lot of your poetry would work as lyrics form what i have just read. and i like your philosphy on writing ) JB

amzing and full of passion.

Oh wow. I have to say you truly have a talent, and such originality! I applaud you!

this is great, i like the formatting. it's got a lot of thought behind it, i like it a lot.

I really love this poem. I've read it so many times before (I find it hard to review). 'the pitch ,' I love that line so much. It makes you fall over the line and it's amazing.

I love this! the metaphoric rythum is beautiful!

This one is excellent, as well. )

I love your rythm!

i am in love with your style, absolutely and completely.

I really love this poem! It leaves a lot of room for your own conclusions ("digging deeper" as I often find myself calling it) which I love. Thanks for your review!

very cool.. i love the ending.. awesome job

I really love this one! Normally with rhymes you have to go and look for, things don't turn out so well but this one really really did. 'she's a poison when you spent good money on a remedy.' This gives the impression that you've been there before and yet you still keep going back. Very nice..

Wow... this is so good and different from anything i've ever read. I like it.

Fuck.. you outdo yourself. i dont know what to say, its everything i wish i could describe in a poem. wonderful idea and i love the title!