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Reviews For: Expression of Bliss
Moroni of the Mount of Ro 2006-08-30 . chapter 1
I MISSED THIS ONE, TOO >_>;; Anyway ... Beautiful.
amazingblazes 2005-11-05 . chapter 1
Inspiration, motivation and experience come together to create a truly happy, perfect poem. *sigh*
bjw 2005-10-28 . chapter 1
Beautiful. It has the quietness that your other poem had too, but it's still able to describe your emotions so powerfully... It's so sweet!:) "Not just an embrace,But a word of deeper emotion." Very nice indeed. But I thought the last line was a little redundant; the poem would have more poignance ending simply with "with you". Nevertheless, good job!:)
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