i love writing songs too and i have to admit that this one is very good. keep it up. u should start a band...

Hmm. I actually think it's pretty good. ^_^

This isn't about me, is it? I would cry if it is. It's so angry!

*tear*

Anyway, other than that minor panic attack, good poem/song. If y'all need music, I'd be happy to supply.