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Reviews For: Another downfall
S.R. Sleasman 2007-02-23 . chapter 1
Wow...I know what "feeling" she was talking about.

Good poem.
Gabriel Lyman 2005-11-11 . chapter 1
wow... violent, angsty... but real. I like it.
Rayne Logan 2005-11-07 . chapter 1
Wow... that's amazing. Gave me a weird feeling inside when I read it :/ Sorta sounds like what I went through a few years ago... I'm better now, thankfully, but I can relate to this poem, and that's what makes poems good... well done. ^^
happypills03 2005-10-30 . chapter 1
yes... doesnt this happen to all of us.. unfortuanalty
addie pray 2005-10-29 . chapter 1
This was very angsty, nothing I haven't read before, but decent. I would suggest you focus on Sinner or Savior, though, because that was your best work, and nothing else is really eye-catching.
aerin 2005-10-29 . chapter 1
-tear-that is all i can say

-aerin
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