Reviews for A Dream on a Bench

ossining 2006-07-23 ch 1,	abuseM, I like this. I think I'm going to have to put you on my author alerts. And maybe on my fave authors if I really like some of your other stuff. This piece has this dreamlike quality to it, but it's very real at the same time. I don't like the "But duh." line that the guy says, but other than that, the dialogue is great, the images are great, everything is great. Good work. Keep writing! :)
queen-lala 2005-10-29 ch 1,	abuseaww how sweet and sad! keep up the good work!
crazy 2005-10-29 ch 1, anon.	abusewow! that's addicting... it's really beautiful.
Elizabeth Bilberry 2005-10-28 ch 1,	abuseI like that wistful feeling she protrays... EB