This started out pretty good but to tell you the truth the rhyming got old after awhile. At some points it seemed to get off and you seemed to try and force it at other times. Some lines also seemed to short for the ones before them and they didn't really seem to flow. Good Job though on the message of the poem. I really like the meaning of it. Drugs are a bad thing to deal with and so many people in the world today have it interfearing with their life. Good Job

Megan (itsonlyme07)