Reviews for Someone else's pain

I Murder on Impulse 2005-12-19 ch 1,	abuseomg im adiccted to ur storys!i hate u now!crieslol write more!
Wishing On the Same Star 2005-11-07 ch 1,	abuseah. i like this poem. very... insightful? that would sort of be the word =D it reveals an unknown world by many xPand its a nice poem to read when you're depressed
xiaobudian 2005-10-30 ch 1,	abuseso... tragic! I feel xtremely sad now. I still think that this could be song lyrics :D This is so sad and ... sniffsYou're very good at evoking emotions from readers sniffs 9oh great poetess!)Keep it up!
HauntedMisery 2005-10-29 ch 1,	abuseThis is great excellent work!
Sally-andersonn 2005-10-29 ch 1,	abuseThe helpless ness fo people and we shall suffer in slilence. Its amazing how you twist tihings and just paraphrase the same ideas, but you do it reallyw ell. so yeah. uh hum. try writing a story.
allyburner 2005-10-29 ch 1, anon.	abuseI like it. The end, like I said b4, is a bit tiresome with the rhythm cos the lines are rather longer than the ones towards the beginning, but it's better than b4. Now... yeah, 'tis'- it doesn't fit with the story. But otherwise, it's great. Very powerful like all your other poems. :D Keep writin' girl! :D - Ally B.