such harsh, wonderful, true words...

the use of such powerful, ugly words describing things that could have once been beautiful makes this sound amazing. There are just so many lines here that strike you, some many unique words and phrases. Great work.

Fantastic. I like your style.

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Whoa... wow, this is amazing and really good, great job!

those last four stanzas are stuck in my heart forever. you are AMAZING. let's get all Gwen Stefani: AMAZING! A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!

I'd say your shit is bananas, but from what I've understood, bananas is a bad thing, unless I've misconstrued it. ;)

this is beautiful. and haunting, in a sense: i love that.

girl you are GOOD!bitexmarks

Last two lines...The whole thing left me speechless. But I'm a sucker for last lines.

fantastic. I am barely coherent as it is. love(ly).

~* noelle

REALLY LOVELY! I was super-happy when that little Author Alert! thing popped up. This did not disappoint me, it was fantastic.. great job!

-lav

That was REALLY good. I loved it.

It's beautiful. The imagery is inequivocally the best part, I think, with this sort of odd rhythm and stream of thought--ties it all together. The line that got me was:

"and:i will become the red-headed juliet whose face you pictured on the wall above my head"

very well done.

great