 Nails For Your Crucifix 2006-01-14 . chapter 1such harsh, wonderful, true words... |
 Jezsh 2005-12-21 . chapter 1the use of such powerful, ugly words describing things that could have once been beautiful makes this sound amazing. There are just so many lines here that strike you, some many unique words and phrases. Great work. |
 Prevaricate 2005-12-09 . chapter 1Fantastic. I like your style.
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 HauntedMisery 2005-12-01 . chapter 1Whoa... wow, this is amazing and really good, great job! |
 wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-11-07 . chapter 1those last four stanzas are stuck in my heart forever. you are AMAZING. let's get all Gwen Stefani: AMAZING! A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!
I'd say your shit is bananas, but from what I've understood, bananas is a bad thing, unless I've misconstrued it. ;) |
 lackluster 2005-11-02 . chapter 1this is beautiful. and haunting, in a sense: i love that. |
 bitexmarks 2005-10-30 . chapter 1 girl you are GOOD!bitexmarks |
 APersonAndAHalf 2005-10-30 . chapter 1Last two lines...The whole thing left me speechless. But I'm a sucker for last lines. |
 poetic abortion 2005-10-29 . chapter 1fantastic. I am barely coherent as it is. love(ly).
~* noelle |
 miss lavender 2005-10-29 . chapter 1REALLY LOVELY! I was super-happy when that little Author Alert! thing popped up. This did not disappoint me, it was fantastic.. great job!
-lav |
 WiltingBlackRose 2005-10-29 . chapter 1That was REALLY good. I loved it. |
 st. maverick 2005-10-29 . chapter 1It's beautiful. The imagery is inequivocally the best part, I think, with this sort of odd rhythm and stream of thought--ties it all together. The line that got me was:
"and:i will become the red-headed juliet whose face you pictured on the wall above my head"
very well done. |
 One Up 2005-10-29 . chapter 1great |