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Weeping Duck
2005-10-31
ch 1,
abuseI love the interesting perspective on this piece. Aw, it was so cute! It's one of those stories that score loads of points on the Gush Factor.

Lucas made me laugh and grin and then tingle with the sadness that I'm not a kid anymore. Wouldn't it be great to go back to those days when you could run wild and nobody would think anything of it? I'd love it.

Anyway, I enjoyed this a lot. It was great writing, a great idea, and a great piece all around!
Midnight In Eden
2005-10-29
ch 1,
abuseLove this... definitely on my favourites list.

It's bittersweet and brilliantly written. The imagery of lies and how colorful they are is done to perfection. The general undertone is heart tugging without being corny or subtly overdone.

.:midnight:.
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