Grave, wide, empowering.

beautiful descriptions.. great poem

one pointer- it should be flee not flea, a flea is a jumpy bitey thing! hehe. other than that this is really nice, i like the imagery (especially "rain sliced hair", just kinda cool) nicely done,

Han.

LOVELY imagery! I liked the choppy descriptions at the beginning, they all seem to hit the reader [me!:D] really quickly, one after the other, and paint this really beautiful picture of the wet, rustic lake. "Gently moulded socks, give way, purple haze.Bright red flecks as giants blood draws gaze.Shadow, sweeping hills and valleys narrowHeaped with plastic rustic charm. Sheep and fallow." Just soo beautiful!:) I enjoyed all of it! But I must ask, why did the rhyming dwindle out halfway through? I really liked the ** sense of rhythm the two-sentenced lines near the beginning gave...

Nevertheless, I think you really managed to capture the wild, free essence of the land..loved it.:)