I see Nightwish and Lacuna Coil in a lot of these songs just because you go back to the chorus so many times like both those bands do. It's really cool.

As usual, your use of words has blown me away. I really hope you go far with your song-writing, you definitely should.

Much love,

Lady Glass

This is good, great job

Wow. That was so chilling. I LOVE the last line - how death can be taken as forever..how that last dream would linger on with death and beyond. *shivers* That creates such a beutiful, haunting feeling. I shall savour it again...

Grammar errors: "Now that your dying" [you're]"Death clock struck" [Would it be better to have "Death's clock struck" instead?]

"Grim reaper takes life/Buries it all alone" Interesting perspective! Stories usually speak of the grim reaper leading souls into the underworld, not actually burying life, so this description was refreshing.:)

Lovely song, keep writing!