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Lord of the Trees 2006-11-07 . chapter 12
Lol. This is a great idea; a 'real' game world. I love it. I'm enjoying the story so far, and can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work!
Misty Tripper 2006-03-01 . chapter 8
Again late! sorry some problems with my email. but anyways, another great entertaining chapter! hurray! Ha, Twitch is halarious! I love him. But I'll never consider Miyu the traveler of ill-omen, she's too cute. I guess I just decided she was cute which doesn't make much sense.. ah sorry, rambiling! Well, can't wait to see what happens next, and if time permits I'll try to get around to reading your other stories!

-Tripper
Misty Tripper 2006-01-31 . chapter 7
Poor Miyu! *hugs Miyu* really good chapter, slightly hyper sorry, and I'm dying for another one, can't wait to read about the 'major global event!'

Really good chapter!XD-Tripper
Misty Tripper 2006-01-13 . chapter 6
This one was cool, I love how Capriccio uses music, that rocks. And Miguel came back! I really can't wait till you update, if you can.

-Tripper
Misty Tripper 2006-01-13 . chapter 5
Haha, I loved Nenko! He's great. Hopefully I'll see him again?

-Tripper
Misty Tripper 2006-01-13 . chapter 4
I'm so sorry I haven't reviewed in so long! There's really no excuse, I just avoided the computer for a while. But this one was great. How he killed people so easily...makes me shiver. And he makes me laugh. Can't wait to see more of Miguel!

-Tripper
Misty Tripper 2005-12-05 . chapter 3
Another great chapter! Miguel seems like a really interesting character,thanks for the character sheet. I'll admit I've never read anything quite like these stories (save for my dad's D&D manual)but I really like them. It's too bad you can't update regularly, but I'll definitly check out your other stories!-Tripper
Misty Tripper 2005-12-04 . chapter 2
I really enjoyed those 2 chapters, I hope you'll soon post it regularly! I especially liked the second one.Can't wait for the 3rd chapter!-Tripper
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