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| miscellanea 2008-05-15 ch 1,  | abuseAhh, this was insane. I loved how it consecutively rhymed at parts, that made it go very smoothly. You're great. |
| ree 2007-09-19 ch 1, anon. | abusevery clever and slightly strange. |
| beware of crazypeople 2006-07-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseOH MY GOD! THAT HAS TO BE ONE OF THE BEST POEM THAT I HAVE EVER READ! YOU HAVE TALENT THAT YOU SERIOUSLY NEED TO EXPRESSE! Never have I thought I would die because of somthing I read but now I am going to tell all my friends about the wonderful poet I have just found. |
| R.J. Crosbie 2006-04-07 ch 1, | abusethat was beautiful. i wasn't sure what it was about. i kind of interpreted it as a trial for a killer, but also business men for some reason... i don't know. that's just what i saw. i'm not sure...but lovely poem. |
| Grape 2005-11-23 ch 1, | abuseAwsome. I love the rythm of this poem. Its really interesting, I liked the line, "Only men with coins for eyes." Nice job! |
| Hell's first Icicle 2005-10-30 ch 1, | abusewow. relli deep. i esp like. "will lend you knowledge/brought in time by/men with coins for eyes."and the last verse. relli powerful =D |
| Moosher 2005-10-29 ch 1, | abuseFreaky but interesting and unique.I love it! Very original idea, lovely repetition and emphasis on some words..and great ending too!Keep 'em coming and write on! --Meme |
| crazy.chaotic.cool 2005-10-29 ch 1, | abuseAwesome poem. It has a gothic effect to it sort of. Kinda reminds me of the Joker from Batman. Great Job! |
| Jen calculates 2005-10-29 ch 1, | abuseReminds me of The Corpse Bride. :) |
| Aryanda 2005-10-29 ch 1, | abuseThis is so COOL. It was creepy, and it had great flow, and I couldn't look away from the page at all. Great job, and I hope there are more like this! |
| heartless beyond hypothermi... 2005-10-29 ch 1, | abuseLol, This Mira likes story/poem alot. It will be sitting in her binder when she can get the printer working. Heh heh... |