 Counting Luv Toxic Stars 2009-03-07 . chapter 9Aw it figures u won't write
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Probably too busy to
Or u have no care to pick up were u left off
Or u have had writers block for such a long period of time
Or u don't check this site anymore
Wow sorry if that sounded bitchy
It's not meant to it
It's just me thinking |
 xx.Crimson Butterfly.xx 2009-01-13 . chapter 9Update please!! |
 l'heautontimoroumenos 2009-01-02 . chapter 2Okay, I can't help but love your story more and more, though I've decided to correct all the french mistakes (yes, I'm a grammar freak, I can't really help that).
So you'd say "ma merveilleuse famille" instead of "ma famille merveilleuse", and then you'd say "Pourquoi se tracasser?" instead of "Pourquoi je tracassez".
I'm sorry if I'm being a pain in the neck, I really can't help it. |
 l'heautontimoroumenos 2009-01-02 . chapter 1This may only be the 1st chapter, but I love your story already.
Just one thing, though : at some point your characters speak a little french. I really didn't get what they meant. If you send me what you originally meant for them to say, I could fix it (I'm french). Because for the moment, it means : "Oh, no problem, Jackie is be just her art of overprotective auto-biographie again" , which is kind of weird.
but apart from that it's great. |
 Hateful Loving 2008-12-20 . chapter 9Hi! i just finished up to chapter 8 and i lvoe your story! im kinda sad you havent updated in the lognest time and was wondering if you would be continuing this story cause i think its amazing and should be finsihed. So please let me know if you will and really amazing job so far on it! :D
HaTeFuL LoViNg |
 Eccthlacine 2008-08-05 . chapter 9TWO YEARS! I should beat you, cause this is an awesome story and TWO YEARS? :( please please please update. Its well written and I'm really curious whats going to happen! |
 janelle 2008-07-26 . chapter 9 plz hurry and update |
 SapphireEyes16 2008-03-03 . chapter 1keep updating, the story is hilarious! |
 Flynstar 2008-02-22 . chapter 1this storys getting reall good! hope you update soon! is this story on hiatus, will it be updated or is it going to stop completely? |
 Seraph-of-Nightsong 2008-02-02 . chapter 9! Will you be writing any more of this story?? I like it so far :):) |
 Crazy Dude, II 2007-08-29 . chapter 9Wow its almost a year since you last updated. Me lovee this story! Its so beautiful! It's as great as bungy jumping. Such an adreline rush. Ok I'll stop freaking you out. Please update! |
 oh.look.a.bird.CHOCOLATE 2007-08-20 . chapter 9LOL!
she called him a twerp wow! that was really funny!!
i like this story
cant wait for an update!! |
 aiyuhxoxo 2007-08-16 . chapter 9hey,please update.i love True |
 Stahlut 2007-08-08 . chapter 9i loved this story to death, it is just to funny and good. and i know that it hasnt been updated in like forever, but i still love it. and deep down i am hoping that you update. because the characters are just all so cute and good. |
 MelGrl 2007-08-06 . chapter 9This story is very amusing. Does Rhea have feelings for a three guys? Please update soon! |