can you please cotinue? You can't just leave us hanging! I'll give you a unicorn if you do!

Can you plz continue this? It's amazing and I can't wait to read more! I know it's been awhile but please?

I really really really 10000000000000000000 ... love this story. I like the cliché of making the ex jealous, but it's your writing that makes it worth the read D. A jear since you updated. I'm not really expecting more, but hoping, a lot.

UPDATE?

Aw it figures u won't write

More for this story

Probably too busy to

Or u have no care to pick up were u left off

Or u have had writers block for such a long period of time

Or u don't check this site anymore

Wow sorry if that sounded bitchy

It's not meant to it

It's just me thinking

Update please!

Okay, I can't help but love your story more and more, though I've decided to correct all the french mistakes (yes, I'm a grammar freak, I can't really help that).

So you'd say "ma merveilleuse famille" instead of "ma famille merveilleuse", and then you'd say "Pourquoi se tracasser?" instead of "Pourquoi je tracassez".

I'm sorry if I'm being a pain in the neck, I really can't help it.

This may only be the 1st chapter, but I love your story already.

Just one thing, though : at some point your characters speak a little french. I really didn't get what they meant. If you send me what you originally meant for them to say, I could fix it (I'm french). Because for the moment, it means : "Oh, no problem, Jackie is be just her art of overprotective auto-biographie again" , which is kind of weird.

but apart from that it's great.

Hi! i just finished up to chapter 8 and i lvoe your story! im kinda sad you havent updated in the lognest time and was wondering if you would be continuing this story cause i think its amazing and should be finsihed. So please let me know if you will and really amazing job so far on it! :D

HaTeFuL LoViNg

TWO YEARS! I should beat you, cause this is an awesome story and TWO YEARS? :( please please please update. Its well written and I'm really curious whats going to happen!

plz hurry and update

keep updating, the story is hilarious!

this storys getting reall good! hope you update soon! is this story on hiatus, will it be updated or is it going to stop completely?

! Will you be writing any more of this story? I like it so far :):)

Wow its almost a year since you last updated. Me lovee this story! Its so beautiful! It's as great as bungy jumping. Such an adreline rush. Ok I'll stop freaking you out. Please update!