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Reviews For: Harry Bawls PI
FlamingDoritos 2005-11-27 . chapter 1
Fun. Melikey! Great job, once again.
simpletonsgrin 2005-10-29 . chapter 1
Definately chuckle-inducing.

The rhythm seemed a bit off, but it's not too difficult overlook.

M'not sure why queers smooching should be shifty- but perhaps you've some sort of problem with homosexuality (or your PI does?)

Eh, to each his own, or something.

-simpleton
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