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| Onyx 2006-05-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseLives up to the title.One of those calming poems. Nice job. |
| e a t i n g . f l o w e r s 2006-02-05 ch 1,  | abuseI love the words you choose to use in your poems. Great work! |
| Wing Chant 2005-10-29 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely took my breath away. I never knew someone could describe rose petals in such an excilerating way until I read this poem! I can actually see those petals floating upon the surface of water. ^^ You deserve to have this poem posted somewhere more worthy of your talent... =O! Because fictionpress is just holding you back! What you doing here for? Start working on a poetry book! -pokes you- Hehe! Loserz. =D |
| simpletonsgrin 2005-10-29 ch 1, | abuseI liked this, though the format you used (with just one or two words a line) is not my favorite. good job- the repetition was not overdone, and the imagery (with the spider's legs and crystal prison) was rather nice. -simpleton |