Ooh, love the primal feel.

awesome job. awesome. awesome. awesomekeep it up!

Also, read and review mine if you'd like. i think you might like them!

Wonderful imagery. Great write ;)

This one made me cringe. It was raw and painful, and so kudos to you for inciting such a reaction.

It could probably be tightened up, but I'll leave that to you.

-simpleton