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It's in the message... 2008-05-02 . chapter 1
Honestly, I never thought about adding glue to food to harden it. I must not be very creative. Try working on formatting, use double-spacing. It's easier on the eyes. Also, "mountain" and "exceedingly" aren't hyphenated (unless you were trying to be creative by hyphenating them). Other than that, pretty funny.

~You may call me Star
Jado the Shadow 2006-05-06 . chapter 1
LMAO! That cheered me up so much today. I can never look at a box of cheerios the same way again. The soggyness is why I eat Chex, gotta have the crunch!

JtS
cmcp 2004-07-14 . chapter 1
lmao your ''neighbor'' is pretty awesome. i love this story.
Forever Foreign 2004-05-17 . chapter 1
well then...this is very interesting...actually i think it is most definitly a stroke of genious...
my stuff is not this light hearted but maybe you could check it out?
Rainbow-Skittles 2003-12-01 . chapter 1
Hi, there!
This ain't technically a review. It's more of dropping a line to see what's up. I haven't seen the old crowd in *so* long. It's weird. I miss the Forum and everyone from there, lol.
BTW, what happened to the site? I sometimes go in every handful of days, and I find the site and the Forum are both down. Also weird. It's probably been since spring or earlier when I last talked to everyone. If the old Forum is long gone, and anyone from the old gang wants to talk, I have one I made up on Bravenet a few years back that I've never done anything with.
Shutting up now, hehe. Peace 2 ye, lass!
Rainy
(former Keeper of the Colors)
tropical kisses 2003-06-15 . chapter 1
hee hee, funnei! ^_^
Mongoose Dog (too damn lazy to sign in) 2002-11-29 . chapter 1
LOL!
IrishVampire13 2002-11-25 . chapter 1
I *told* you that you belong in the loony bin.
Lissa 2000-09-29 . chapter 1
weird...but amusing...hehe
Grene 2000-07-07 . chapter 1
what the hell? This was weird in a kool way, but deranged in another...
Rose Flame 2000-06-04 . chapter 1
Different. Very different. In a good way. ;)
a person 2000-06-02 . chapter 1
Lol.
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