   Chaos Apple 2006-01-28 . chapter 1This is a very raw poem, and it's so...sad that by the end I was crying. |
 Michael l'oeil fol 2005-11-04 . chapter 1Raw and powerful... |
 gogodiscodancer 2005-10-30 . chapter 1wow. that is really powerful and beautiful. you can really feel the pain. great work! |
 Chelseamuffin. 2005-10-30 . chapter 1You had me crying by the end of it... |
 HauntedMisery 2005-10-29 . chapter 1This is beautiful and I mean beautiful, excellent work! |
 miss whoever 2005-10-29 . chapter 1This is a very good poem, it really conveys the feelings of anger and pain, I like the thoughts added to the poem, its a nice touch |
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