this is something everyone can relate to. nice work :D

Aww...this is so sweet. Beautifully done. Hey, I sent ya an invite to join my site. Watch for it, its called the Chatter Bug. Hope we see ya there. By all means keep on writing.

i had trouble with the flow, but the concept was pleasant. it's hard not to be a bit cynical though...some people never find their "wonders". nice job. thanks for the reviews!

wow, that's amazing, and really encoraging(sp)

That was a good poem.I liked it alot,but only because i also dream.