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| ilovetheopera 2006-04-15 ch 1,  | abuseehh hey feeq. i also broke a lot of stiches during sewing teehee. and i like jammed a LOT of machines. the cute old lady got quite mad at me i think. i like the onamatopoeia in this poem. and the visual format of the words is interesting, like the italicism (im quite sure that's not a real word..) i like the (unintentional?) symbolism of the static and friction and the repetition of 'burns' in two verses. overall, i like it. and yes, it's unique. |
| braindead1345 2006-04-14 ch 1, | abuseThis is the best! No, really, its really good! Very interesting |
| scaredconfused 2006-02-22 ch 1, | abuseI LOVE sewing, and dancing, and laughing, all of your poetry touches me. I lov your work alot. Great use of imagery. Good job. |
| Lauren Wolfe 2006-02-20 ch 1, | abuseYes, indeed, unique! Great use of emphasis on certain words! Lovely work! ^^ |
| Yuffei 2006-02-18 ch 1, | abuseO... Neat.I actually LOVE your style.Way to go there. O_O |
| xx-cronopio-xx 2006-02-06 ch 1, | abuseUnique, indeed. I never thought I could feel so deeply for a threaded needle. - Kat |
| contrast and friction 2006-02-04 ch 1, | abuseI really like this piece - it's quite abstract & creative, but beautifully written. I also love the formatting. Thanks for the reviews! |
| stellaz 2006-02-04 ch 1, anon. | abusevery different pov so its pretty nice! the fact that it is from the pov of a thread makes it nice. i like this one alot to! |
| pleasecometrue 2005-10-30 ch 1, | abuseLove it from beginning to end. Great write ;) |
| Lucid Nonsense 2005-10-29 ch 1, | abuseIt wasy interesting. I can honestly say I've never read another poem about thread. Your personification was well done. |
| Finger Dingbat 2005-10-29 ch 1, | abusevery strange, but i really liked it |