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aki-miu 2008-11-19 ch 11,	ok, so this story seems to be abandoned (I mean, it's been over a year...) BUT, I thought I'd submit one of these things anyways. Because, well, I wanted to. Some random comments: It was a bit hard to read at first, but once I got the hang of it... I like your "linebreaker"s. I do. They make me smile... I also like how in the emails between Luke and Rick, the subject lines also have a mini-conversation (mostly)... I don't like the Bureau Remembrance Agency in Nerves (genius!) logs, but I see how they're necessary sometimes... The way this was written distracts me from the plot. I like Mr. Lawler. And Vance. And Skinny. And the not-so-random randomness of this story. I'm bored of typing. So, uhm, yeah. Dunno if you're gonna update or not again. But, whatever, I guess...
nomy 2008-11-01 ch 11,	no more?..seriously you have to update to end this one!!..coz when i read this i lmao and sometimes want to kill Luke for his playing field thing..but come on~~!!update please!!..i even fall down to my knees and beg you...LOL
Ziusura 2008-09-26 ch 10,	...I forgot to say that I love Rick...but then I came across this little fact that you can't review more than once for each chapter...and I was REJECTED! ...so I reviewed for this chapter instead...and I'll add a little commentary too Also, have you ever noticed that lower case 'l's are slightly taller than uppercase 'i's. I just did when I typed 'I'll'. ANYWAYS, I really loved the journal. It was a nice touch...and Rick OWNS. Oops, I just scared away my cat. y'know, the one that does the weird 'slurpy noises'...xP
Ziusura 2008-09-26 ch 11,	First of all, I'd like to say that I love the way you write this through the letters, e-mails, etc. he gets, it makes it awesome. I'd be a lil' afraid of what my cat would telepathically communicate to me. She makes this weird slurpy noise when she sleeps and does the Darth Vader breathing. It's really creepy. HAVE MY BABIES! FOR REAL. ...I have something to tell you... I'm sorry, but...I don't have the equipment necessary for you to have my babies...but I'm sure we'll figure it out.
merei-chan 2008-09-13 ch 4,	So far, this is one of the funniest stories I've read on . I love it. ^^ Please keep up the good work! (And if this story is actually ended, and I missed the notice... Ignore that last line!)
Miztli 2008-09-04 ch 1,	Don't know if you want to know this, but shrugs I found a South Park fanfic with the same format as your story. As far as I see is not a copy, but... maybe you want to check it out better The fanfic is "You've Got Mail" by Zakuyoe. And... are you goign to continue this story someday puppy eyes
Koira 2008-09-01 ch 11,	Hey you, are you still alive?
blackberrydream 2008-08-05 ch 11,	This story is probably one of the greatest things I've ever read. It's so creative especially adding in the conscious's dialouge and the whole panic squad thing, Oh! and Skinny's telepathic messages. Absolutedly hilarious. Ya know Luke's situations is kind of like a soap opera so this story is kind of like a funny take on a soap opera (although soaps already are funny. The bad acting is entertaining. Well 'soaps' like soap operas of course I'm not talking about soap. Soap just makes things clean...which I guess might could be funny...if I was high or something...) Anyway please update this story because I need the giggles it gives me for survival. PS. I LOVE Taylor. I hope he wins. But then again I won't be sad if he loses because I love Rick too... PSS. I also love Vance and Chris! Especially together! PS. Okay I'm done. blackberry
Liviania 2008-08-03 ch 9,	This is your reminder that it's been a year. pout Livi
angst muffin 2008-06-26 ch 11,	oh my god. oh my god. i'm praying that you haven't abandoned this story, because this is one of the few written-in-letters/postcards/emails/brain reports that i will actually READ and LOVE and OHMYGODILOVEYOUMARRYMEPLEASE? at first in the story, i was praying that taylor and luke would end up together, but that was mostly because i hated all the other options aside from rick and i just thought the whole "add rick to the list" thing was a joke. but now, if rick and luke don't end up together, i'll cry. i'll, like, squirt chemical cleanser into my eye if i have to, but i will CRY. i love this story. it's so amazing. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. -hearts-
Shampain86 2008-03-24 ch 11,	Oh. My. Gawd. You HAVE TO UPDATE! ! ! ! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!?!?!?!?! I love love, no wait, I'm OBSESSED WITH THIS STORY! Please update! Please? Pretty please? You are a genius and you should really Really REALLY update!
Insomiak 2008-02-27 ch 11,	You haven't updated in like six months! ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME? BECAUSE IT'S WORKING. Anyway. "POST-IT NOTE FROM VANCE: You look really sleepy. Take a nap." I giggled at that a whole bunch. Vance is neat. RICK IS SO GOING TO KICK TAYLOR'S ASS INTO THE GROUND. I adore this. Peace. —Insomiak.
Insomiak 2008-02-27 ch 10,	Vance is lovely. Like ice-creme-with-pie-and-cookies lovely. And Rick is so WINNING. YES. —Insomiak.
Insomiak 2008-02-27 ch 9,	Score two for Rick! Or is it three? "Luke blushes because he’s the stereotypical uke, underdog, butt-buddy, effeminate, woman of the couple who actually blushes." I love you. Luke is a butt-slut. —Insomiak. ps. My eyes are BLEEDING.
Insomiak 2008-02-27 ch 8,	I think I said "fuck off Alec" sixty times. Aha... I get way too into this shit. I really really love this! I hope EGC and WUC get back to... helping Luke out. They're silly. HAPPY DAY! —Insomiak.

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