oh my gosh, 4 men.

Dear MMPP,
u said in ur author note that you arent abandoning this story and yet it seems like you are. have shame for cutting us off from what is true greatness! i know i'm coming in way late, but still it's really funny and i love the message form so please update?
- Crimsonoaks

your stories make me happy in a manic way.

I can't believe it, you haven't updated in wo years!! Please Please please don't abandon the story, this is absolutely the most wonderful story I've found in this site and don't you dare to ruin a poor girl's fun that way.

Just...UPDATE, please. at least tell us if you really plan to abandon the story, so i can stop checking it every ten minutes. I know it sounds harsh, but don't blame mee...

Okay, so far, I'm on chapter 7. I'm really drawn into this story. It's so random and funny. I love how it's written and chapter 6 was awesome! It's very different and hilarious! I can't wait to read more.

ok those two chapters were really annoying. although i guess for other people it was pretty popular. bit too disconnected for me tho. why am i even reviewing? because i feel like if i don't, then the last 10 minutes of my life would have been totally wasted. well at least u got another review. or maybe i just don't like luke. who knows.

honey this story is absolutely BRILLIANT and i am positively saddened at the fact that you haven't updated in 2 years! 2 YEARS. so i'm guessing the story's been abandoned, or something? i mean i know you said it wouldn't be but like.. can't help but wonder, you know, considering the circumstances. anyway, i really didn't think i'd enjoy reading something in this format, but i truly did. it was hilarious and sweet and completely original and i love love love it.

and go team rick. TEAM RICK! but i will enjoy seeing him and taylor battling it out for uke-luke.

KEEP ON WRITING, MY DEAR. :)

why oh why has this not been finished?!
i want to know what happens. (:

I love stories in this format, and this is genuinely funny (quite a rare thing ;D). I hope the rest is just as good as what I'm reading now ;D

ok, so this story seems to be abandoned (I mean, it's been over a year...) BUT, I thought I'd submit one of these things anyways. Because, well, I wanted to. Some random comments:

It was a bit hard to read at first, but once I got the hang of it... I like your "linebreaker"s. I do. They make me smile... I also like how in the emails between Luke and Rick, the subject lines also have a mini-conversation (mostly)... I don't like the Bureau Remembrance Agency in Nerves (genius!) logs, but I see how they're necessary sometimes... The way this was written distracts me from the plot. I like Mr. Lawler. And Vance. And Skinny. And the not-so-random randomness of this story.

I'm bored of typing. So, uhm, yeah. Dunno if you're gonna update or not again. But, whatever, I guess...

no more?..seriously you have to update to end this one!!..coz when i read this i lmao and sometimes want to kill Luke for his playing field thing..but come on~~!!update please!!..i even fall down to my knees and beg you...LOL

...I forgot to say that I love Rick...but then I came across this little fact that you can't review more than once for each chapter...and I was REJECTED!

...so I reviewed for this chapter instead...and I'll add a little commentary too
Also, have you ever noticed that lower case 'l's are slightly taller than uppercase 'i's.
I just did when I typed 'I'll'.

ANYWAYS, I really loved the journal. It was a nice touch...and Rick OWNS.

Oops, I just scared away my cat.
y'know, the one that does the weird 'slurpy noises'...xP

First of all, I'd like to say that I love the way you write this through the letters, e-mails, etc. he gets, it makes it awesome.

I'd be a lil' afraid of what my cat would telepathically communicate to me. She makes this weird slurpy noise when she sleeps and does the Darth Vader breathing. It's really creepy.

HAVE MY BABIES!
FOR REAL.


...I have something to tell you...
I'm sorry, but...I don't have the equipment necessary for you to have my babies...but I'm sure we'll figure it out.

So far, this is one of the funniest stories I've read on .

I love it. ^^ Please keep up the good work! (And if this story is actually ended, and I missed the notice... Ignore that last line!)

Don't know if you want to know this, but *shrugs*
I found a South Park fanfic with the same format as your story. As far as I see is not a copy, but... maybe you want to check it out better
The fanfic is "You've Got Mail" by Zakuyoe.

And... are you goign to continue this story someday *puppy eyes*