It's harsh and real and almost unreal in that reality...

I think
that you just ousted my all time favorite poem in favor of this one.
Congrats!

Wow. I've read all your poems up to this one and I cannot believe I've never read you before.

Absolutely amazing.

♥

Much Love-->Suicidal_Greeting

Oh, I really love this. Just the way you put it all together is great.

suffocating in his bedside drawer

my god :| gorgeous desperate helpless imagery...

and isn't love just perfect curled inside a

sidewalk-chalk outline

i may love you. certainly, i love this poem - nay, i would marry this poem. it is GORGEOUS.

♥

that rocks. you are my new hero.

gosh Jess, it's like, fast-paced, BOOM, it exploded right in my face. you are so gifted. I loved your wordplay in here, the capital letters, it felt like you were screaming.

This poem hit me like an eighteen wheeler carying a full load of bricks (which is a good thing). Excellent use of parantheses & such.

great work with the parentheses. they really have an impact.the wording too.

Wow. That was amazing. The format you used is amazing. I've never seen poetry in a form like that.

fucking genius. I can't even think of words to describe how I feel. it's so pretty.

~* noelle

I'm envious and in (awe). I lovelove "be(leave)". You're a genius, truly.

"Jesus in the Garden of Gethsemane" - Wow.

You should publish. I would buy.

You never cease to amaze me.

the format amazes me andthe use of vocabulary leaves me

speechless.