dont ever hurt yourself nothin could can come of it...and the people she tries to keep happy by putting an act on were just stupid on there part for not noticing what she was doing...and if you are trying to protect them doing that doesnt help(not trying to be an asshole or blame bad stuff on you) but stuff like that makes stuff worse so if you have problems tlk to them like a sibling or someone close that you know that no matter what happens they will always love you...

Morbid and sad, but I guess I like that sort of stuff. At least that's what I tend to write. Nice rhyming (no idea if I spelled that correctly).
Bye.

First of all thanks for the review on my poem. I like this poem. All its short sentences but descriptiveness makes it nice and its not too dark... though really dark isnt bad either. Good poem though. --Darkest Angels

Dear Anne, you may not want to talk to me but I still think your a good author and i hope you read my poem to you called Friends? I just, I don't know... Great poems...

good starting... but it seems as if some of your rhymes are forced.