This is cute Lizz. I like it.

This is not exactly a review, just a few comments, so please feel free to delete if you'd like

This is 00hello_dolly00 from livejournal, but you can call me sarah :) After reading your post on the eljay, i was inspired to make an account of my own, as well as read your stories. did you write this for class? you are a talented writer. i like the similiarity between the football team in the story.. and fremont's.

the talking cat was clever. your poems were good as well. i am adding you to my favorite authors list and hopefully will be able to post some stories of my own for you to critique :)