Reviews for Tragic Message - FictionPress.com

Wogan May 2006-07-26 ch 1,	abuseHad this been written for me, I would have slipped into a deeper depression. It's deep, true, but out of line with the summary. It's basically a brief window into pain. Having it end on a lighter note would have been better. Good job either way. It does display emotion, which, it seems, most pieces of writing lack. Well done!
In State of Agony 2006-01-31 ch 1,	abuseit sounds good
Rozovian G 2005-12-15 ch 1,	abuseSomething fishy with the phrasing, that about messengers fear. Other than that, and overall, it's good. Last line... ouch. So it's not one of those light pass-it-by poems, it's got depth and it hurts to read it, actually. So it's a powerful poem you've written. Well done!
Octello 2005-12-12 ch 1,	abuseSad and awsome!
Princess Hannah 2005-11-10 ch 1,	abuseTragic message? Sounds like a suicide note.
Calliope Foster 2005-11-02 ch 1,	abuseLike a fool with his beer That was a superb line! It jumped out at me right away! And what talent you have for being so young, great work, mi amiga.