whoa! i LOVE the flow of this poem, and the repeating of 'but you can't. this poem is definitely going on the favorites list

dragonzz

First off: YAY FOR MAKING COOKIES! Yeah, anyways, nice poem. I'm always writing poetry because it makes every day better so all my notebooks of poetry make me look really depressed. Nyeh. Do you have an older sister, by the way?

Happy Writing!

Chovaffeine, Love, Harry Potter, and Billie Joe,

W.

How sad! Sibling rivalry, maybe? In any case, good writing, keep it up!