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| Moonlight Tigress 2006-02-02 ch 1,   | lol... sure... im reviewing now, arent i? course i am... cant resist... :) okay, onto what i thought about the poem. the imaginary that runs through this is brilliant... i can see it all in my head... lol... yep... the last sentence rings so true to... always addicted to the word... love it... love it... love it... and did i mention i love it? heh... okay... well.. yeah... i really enjoyed reading this... love it... :) |
| Maranwe Telrunya 2006-01-10 ch 1, | I loved it! The whole idea and the way you worded it all was very good. |
| swaggering curses 2005-12-03 ch 1, | Well, since you asked so nicely. I love the moth metaphor. And the "gravity" line makes me think about black holes, for some reason. I'm not fond of the use of ellipses (it just seems.. unprofessional?) but that's just a personal thing, so whatever blows your skirt. =) Very lovely. So what are you addicted to, exactly? |
| Shadowed Echo 2005-11-12 ch 1, | It's interesting. Really interesting.~Shadowed Echo |
| IgnitedIcicle 2005-11-03 ch 1, | Earlier today I was wrapped up in this idea! I realized how my mind, thoughts, reactions, my whole being is like this; and no one quite gets it. My highly descriptive, intrigued, fictional mind... is very much non-fiction to me. And words I say are real. Maybe the tides do change, the story -which is me- develops, and pages always turn. I fall in love with the words, with their words, with MY WORDS that are said... And I will always come back after the fall. Whenever I am most doubtful, or fed up with the way I exist: I have more need to come back. Love of literacy is a wandering, pulling force. I think it leads me wherever I long to be. I just don't agree with the reasons, at times. I HIGHLY & STRONGLY LIKE THIS POEM! :) |
| naughtgreen 2005-10-31 ch 1, | The metaphor seems to be somewhat self-indulgent, but only because you use the word "proverbial," which isn't a good word since the metaphor is clearly a metaphor and you don't have to tell me. I'm sorry. That was sort of harsh. No more literary criticism for me. |
| Hidden Lies 2005-10-31 ch 1, | Awesome poem... not all Aussie are depressing, hehe, there are some good poems that aren't depressing. I guess it is just that when people are in ** moods that they write poems... I dunno. Anyway... a great poem, loved it lots! I like the way you have used metephors, such as falling, to deepen the poem. Nice work! |