and A promise break... that line seems awkward

I like this poem.. i can definately relate.. that last stanza is really great

well, there's a grammar mistake, a promise break should have an 'S' behind break.

overall, it is thought provoking. The ocean to me isn't exactly very comparable to something like missing someone though.

I liked your simple use of language. This poem is pretty good, but I think you could make it longer and expand more on its meaning.