Great story! Many outcomes could happen after that ending and i'd appreciate if you were to continue. Personally I like both of the hero's legacy drafts, it's just that they're two different stories.

...Up. Date. NOW!! I refuse to believe you left this on a FRICKING CLIFFHANGER!!

*crosses arms* *taps foot* waiting...

:) CD

I liked that!

the dream sequence, that is.

:) CD

hmm. Maya, yes? As in the sanskrit word for "Illusion"?

:) CD

*cracks up* "Sorry, Chaos. Ya snooze, ya lose."

Great line. have i mentioned that i love Myria?

:) CD

...Why didn't you use Michaela, Mikaela, etc.? Raphael is the Healer, Michael the Protector, and Gabriel the Herald. Of course, there's four others, but oddly, they are not mentioned in the Christian Bible.

So i guess I was wrong. Arianna is NOT Myria, unless her thing is she can twin herself.

:) CD

...I know... his girlfriend is Myria, isn't she?

*cracks up*

:D CD

wow. Powerful. Poor Arianna... So sorry I haven't been able to keep up with your updates. this story is amazing. Where wil you go from here?

I really liked it i like how your character seems like a normal person. I cant wait to read more.

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!

Okay... cliffhanger? Well, this chapter was a bit more confusing than the others, and a bit more sombre, too. And maybe I will 'freak', but that's yet to be found out... so update. I just got fired from my job, so I'll have more time to review. Isn't that nice? :(

-SapphireIris

Well ,that was certainly an interesting chain of events. I can't wait to find out what is coming next!

WAH! Too sad. (Actually I am shamed to say that I never really liked Arianna, but now that she is dead (maybe) I kind of miss her.) Okay what's with the cat?

holy **... in a good way

...you can't just leave it there! that's terrible...yet a great way to make me come back for more. please continue this soon!