Wow! This is...amazing. You have my deepest praise. Pleze review me sometime.

*Jada Black*

Wow this is beautiful. I love your vision. Your words are like a cry from hell.

Shavo

i like that-an object and a danger as an emotion.

'A disjointed heart' was a powerful way to start the poem. Another line I really loved was 'paper cut kisses' which slightly contradicted itself in a great way. I could really relate to that line, and it gave me a feeling of how even the good can hurt type of thing to put it simply.

Anyway, amazing poem.

ANNA

i like the phrase "paper cut kisses." I found the mix of apathy and magnetic current intrestingly ironic, and the word usage was good

I grapsed the meaning of the last line, I do believe. All in all, I like it. Nice word choice, very emotional.

-Sky

okay, I didn't get the poem the first time through, but the second time, it made sense.

I like your choice of words, and the pure angst of the poem.

Though I didn't get the last line..

‘Red Car Lightning is my best emotion.’”