I loved this. Its great. its one of those stories where the ending is unexpected and you make up the ending. the detail, the suspense all great qualities

Hey! It's me again. DeNiM mAsTeR...well...that was my name on this site. I've changed it though, as you can see.^^

These short stories are really well done. I can't wait to see where you go with these. It seems really original and scary.

I don't know what else to say...um...you should review my new writings (yes, I've started writing again XD). I look forward to hearing from you again!

*s.y.g.n.a.l.l.o.s.t*

Amazing description :) I wish I could be as descriptive as you are.

CK

Very good. You use good description :) You're an awesome writer. Keep up the good work.

CK

(Claps) Bravo! I like the suspense, and the descriptions are top-notch.