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Reviews For: Virtual Reality
Isabel Risone 2005-12-10 . chapter 1
This was a pretty cool story. It makes a person think and wonder until the end. Very neat concept, and very well-written. ^_^
Skyrunner 2005-11-25 . chapter 1
One word: wow. Very creepy and well-written and apparently heartfelt, if that's a good word for it. Sometimes I feel that way.
dreamshell 2005-11-22 . chapter 1
neat concept. really delves deep into teenage angst; feelings of alienation and loneliness, good stuff. also, the simple thought of realizing you don't exist is just...well, fascinating.
Sukiam6 2005-11-21 . chapter 1
wow...nice job, it was something that definatly got me a thinkning. Kind of made my head hurt...interesting idea to say the least.
hotsauce6548 2005-11-20 . chapter 1
Very cool story. Made me really think. : )

There were few mistakes. Great job!
tomato-greens 2005-11-03 . chapter 1
Wonderfully creepy. (Your other story, Networking, is now on my favorite stories--just so you know.)
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