and i love you for having written this.

the line about the "stories live foreve, but not so their authors" seems like it is missing a word... i know what you meant by it, but it took me a few readovers to understand.

the title is hilarious, and i know exactly that feeling! hahaha good stuff.

Oh yes. I hate it when people say that something is really good, even though its crap. The idea was good and I like the last paragraph. The events and their descriptions are good but things could be a little clearer.

There is one word, and one word only: ouch.

Fantastic.

Lol, wonderful start, really made me laugh. "That part wasn't a surprise"

Fabulous idea, hilarious ending. I keep laughing!!

Keep writing!