You have got to be kidding...

Um... that was unexpected, to say the least.

Poor Kate.

I guess it leaves room for a sequel!

Wow. Intense. :-)

Another great chapter. :-)

One minor point... Graeme gets mad at Matt and Ben for going after Haldis - but wasn't he the one who gave the order in the first place? (previous chapter: "... he’s not a part of Rhodes’ organisation, no use to us - you get the chance to finish this make sure it’s done.")

Wow. Pretty intense chase sequence. :-)

Very nice. I'm really enjoying this - it's little wonder it won NaNo. :-)

Nice start. About the only thing I'd want to change is Matt smashing the dead earpiece under his foot - it would leave too much evidence for people to follow up on.

It's starting to sound like a great story and i like how you've got the credits at the start. It makes it easier to determine who's who.