please! please! please! update! lol :)

an ingenious twist of cliches. love it!

s2.eina

what an awesome story! I think you're doing really well and I wish you would update.. it's just getting interesting.

You're doing great so far; I wouldn't have guessed you are based in Asia from this first chapter, and I can usually tell with other stories within the first paragraph. I don't think it's problematic that you don't mention the city, there is still a sense of setting because of the highschool. Also, I think the premise is very original: I love that it's told from the cheerleader's POV instead of the usual quiet girl, it gives us a new insight and makes her seem a little more human. And I was surprised by the plot twist with the principal, it promises to make things extra interesting and not cliched. :)

I realy liked this chapter.
The only part I felt was ignored was that she never told Chris why she went out with him.

I just realized you did tell us the geek guy's name. It's Chris. Sorry about that. Just ignore my last review. I'm sort of tired right now, so I'm not comprehending right.

So I noticed you spelled 'Mom' 'Mum' in one line. That's the British version. Someone probably already told you this though. But just in case they didn't, I'm just letting you know.

Have we even figured out what Trish's date's name is? I'm slightly confused about who he is.

Great chapter.

I loved this chapter. There was a scene with Connor and Trish! Best thing ever since sliced bread! haha I like how Trish talks about how one person can make a difference. That was really cool. The ending was really good too. Trish's attack on Jacob was intense. Loved it.

Another awesome chapter.
I'm really interested in this brown haired geek guy. Potential love interest? I think so. haha
That was really nice of Trish to help Jade out. The song was funny too, by the way. And the band name. We're on Crack.

I would love to see Trish with Connor. He sounds really cool.
I really like your idea of getting the leaders of the cliques to try to stop bullying and fighting between the cliques. This story has a lot of originality. It's really good.

First of all, I want to say you do a really good job of capturing an American school. It came off as your average American school.

I only noticed one mistake:"at least I thought so until I lost him a sickeningly cliché way to partner girl."

I think you might have meant to put an 'in' after 'him.'

I really like your concept. It literally is trying to fight the Cliches you normally see on fictionpress.

Wow, I love this story. It's so interesting, and I actually like all the characters. Though, I've got to say, I hope to learn more about Cassey and Jacob. Update soon, please!

i'm actually feeling sorry for trish.

you're summary immediately attracted me. stories on the other side are always more interesting.

amazing job :)

.. WHY ISN'T THERE A NEXT CHAPTER BUTTON? -sobs-

I simply ADORE Trish, I miss Logan. (Even though I don't know much about him, LAWL.) And uh, I love the main character. Liz annoys me. I like it so far. :D