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| InSilverShadows 2007-12-21 ch 1, | abuseI love it when people do stuff like this. XD |
| For What Its Worth 2006-12-27 ch 1, | abuseI think nobody realizing Casey was gone is a rather sad way to end things. They shoud at least know she disappeared. But realizing she is different is going to come as a shock. It would be interesting if she went back to Earth for a while, then returned ot Avadur. And Irian. lol. |
| Dust Cloud 2006-04-10 ch 1, | abuseAnother awesome work! Except for all the repitition at the end. But I really liked the use of the language. Keep up the good work! |
| Mayaj 2006-02-05 ch 1, | abuseHa, I like it! So sweet...! |
| A B Lewis 2005-11-26 ch 1, | abuseAwesome song. I love that Ray Bradbury story (He's one of my favorite authors) And I know i always just say the same thing each time i reveiw, but it's true! :) I love writing songs and things about my stories. It's fun. |
| Scooz 2005-11-18 ch 1, | abuseHAHAHAHA! I am not much of an Elton John person, but I do know the Rocket Man song from Family Guy and I think you did a pretty good job of meshing your lyrics and the original tune together. |
| miss understanding 2005-11-05 ch 1, | abuseI've only heard clips of the real song, but I like your parody. It's creative and the meter fits in with the best of what I've heard at home. Great job! ^_^ Toodles! |
| Lccorp2 2005-11-01 ch 1, | abuseHarr. Archdemon Lord Duffikus: Well, my Creator's not really into the songfic thing...but you managed to make him laugh. That's a very great accomplishment, making a sullen guy like him laugh. |
| Mya von Dor 2005-10-31 ch 1, | abuseI think it's pretty good. I'd come up with some sort of actual critique here, but I've never heard the song, so I'm prolly not the best person to be doing so. Course, I just admire people who can write songs in general, so...yeah...I did write a parady once, like five years ago, but that's besides the point.Though one thing I guess I could say is that stuff is typically best when/if you can throw a twist to the end. Maybe this is just the way poetry is, but yeah, just a thought. :) |
| Teshgirl 2005-10-31 ch 1, | abuse"Rocket Man" is a cool song. The only reason I'm familiar with it is cuz my sister watches her Jason Mraz dvd ALL THE TIME, and he sings it during an interview... This was cool! I could imagine the melody and stuff. Good work. Tesh : ) |
| simpletonsgrin 2005-10-31 ch 1, | abuserepetitive, but there's not much you can do- considering elton john songs always are. THis brought back fond memories of playing Blizzard games in middle school. Fun parody. You know who Weird al is, right? -simpleton |
| Elwing StarSpray 2005-10-31 ch 1, | abuseThat's incredably cool. -nods- ^.^ I haven't heard the song though...I'll have to look for it...YAY INTERNET! ^.^ ~Lightning Princess |