Reviews for The Geography Student

Reviews For: The Geography Student

Godly Luke Staden 2006-04-15 ch 1,	abusei looked at your other stuff and i personally prefer the shorter stuff but i liked this one, the end was the best by far
no.peace.los.angeles 2006-02-19 ch 1,	abuseFavorite line: "Without the excitement of lapping, tangling tongues." I just like the tangling in there b/c it doesn't really seem to fit, but it works so well. This is a really long poem. Wow. It's interesting, though. It's cool when people bring in other disciplines to poetry. Keep writing! :)
inthebrink.of.damnation 2006-01-04 ch 1,	abuse@.< 0oer..♥
thursdays and rain 2005-11-22 ch 1,	abusei absolutely love the ending c: amazing piece! adds to favorites btw, thanks for the review o'-'o
Sally-andersonn 2005-11-11 ch 1,	abuseI like the first few stanzas (I'm not sure what the paragraph things in poems are called).Then it started to get really abstract, and really metaphory and similish. Then I started to get lost. And my attention started to drift. I got a few things, but it would be better if it were shorter.
Aslan Israel 2005-11-09 ch 1,	abuseLove the end. would have to say I'm a history person myself, though.
Exquisitely 2005-11-08 ch 1,	abuseI always have to check the dictionary while reading your work, yet I never cease to be amazed by your vocab, and the way you manipulate the words. "in storm-driven songs where/there is precipitation, but not in the cliché/of tears mashing into blue-gray" The subtle way you bring across the underlying subject matter just makes up the beauty this poem is.
Third World 2005-11-06 ch 1,	abuseIt IS long. I'd like to hear it read out loud. Cuz, well I..um..yeah. :] I agree with the person that said the thoughts are a bit hard to follow, but I like your word play and what not. Although, the language is a bit...oh i dunno, it reminds me of shakespeare. But I think its a very good piece. ty for the review!
mizu no kokoro 2005-11-06 ch 1,	abusequite an evocative piece~ makes me think twice about certain career options~ lol~ great work! keep writing!
Aquafied 2005-11-05 ch 1,	abusedear god this makes me swoon of lappingtanglingtongues-ah. and we remain un-touchingly untouched- oh so ever tickling tangling metaphors make me collaspe with unimaginable wonder. there is precipitation, but not in the clichéof tears mashing into blue-graystreakshe does not say- reminds me of a motion city soundtrack song. ever still swooning. does not admit, oh so ever.and the meausure of the world (woman) is such many to little worlds.pure genius you are.
method acting 2005-11-01 ch 1,	abuseBeautiful wonderful amazing likewoah. Creative formatting that tempts ones curiostiy, vivid imagery wihtout over doing it, a perfect bablance of straightforward and iminate. Just lovely. Wonderful job.
Unready 2005-11-01 ch 1,	abusehm, nice poem. it is a little long, though--the chain of thought is hard to follow (or maybe its just me)

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