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| Shasta Valentine 2008-04-06 ch 1,   | i truly wish i knew more about this story. this poem is disgustingly beautiful. and i agree with that one guy. could be my enemy sounds better. way to step out of the angst box and create this! --sv |
| Kissan Silma 2006-11-27 ch 1, | Awesome, lots of emotion in it. |
| jteich31 2005-11-03 ch 1, | Hey thanks for the review! I'm no poetry expert, in fact I never write poetry, but I really did enjoy that. It was very...scary. Good. Oh, and third paragraph. Instead of "Could be dubbed my enemy," "Could be my enemy" might be stronger. Idk, that's just what I think. Thanks again. Keep writing! |
| Forgotten Wings 2005-11-02 ch 1, | That was amazing...you really portrayed so much emotion...it was beautiful. |
| neath the willows 2005-11-01 ch 1, | i realy felt this one. betrayel is something everyones felt yet there will never be enough words for it. theres always more ink even when the blood drys up. |
| Nearly There 2005-11-01 ch 1, | Woah! This is creepy and so so excellent. I love the imagery. It's truely fab. Difficult subject - very difficult, but such emotion! I'd appricate so much if you'd check a piece of my work called 'Title: Unknown' - I want to boach the same subject, but am not sure which road to go down... You seen pretty talented, and your opinion would be of such great value to me, it really would. All in all, a great piece of poetry - shocking, creepy and brilliant imagery never fail to impress me!! |