sad and beautiful.. I love that first stanza

I love it. 're-wire my smile' I like that. Keep it up!

Excellent work *applaudes* well done! Write on! ^_^

~Anna~

This is a great poem, but i still think you need a hug.

Hey! This is really great. You obviously have a huge talent. I really like the last stanza, and we've all felt like this at some time or another.I'd really appricaite your views on some of my work, especailly 'Title: Unknown', cos you seem so talented I'm sure any feeback would do me the world of good!

This was superb. The second and third verses were my favorites.