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| Moondog Dozier 2006-02-15 ch 1,  | abuseEnd line was wonderful. Great unexpected contrast. |
| FunkyFlower17 2005-12-07 ch 1, | abusepretty good. love the last line. great imagery and flow. brilliant! ~mez~ |
| Arn 2005-11-01 ch 1, | abusewow awesome haiku much better than the ones i make :) anyway good job i liked the way it looks like a raindrop, if you look at the way the text is shaped in general. Very nice haiku, except storm shouldnt be part of the haiku? ...well dont mind me im just a critic to everyone so no one likes my comments. Whatever, great job, i liked it anyway. |
| Maisha Mafuriko 2005-11-01 ch 1, | abuseB*E*A*U*T*I*F*U*L*L*Y penned |
| TheLOVE TheHATE 2005-11-01 ch 1, | abuseaww i like this hiku its simple and its beautiful, i read it slowly and carefully and it made me feel like it was raining outside.. (even though its like 80 degrees here in san diego) |