End line was wonderful. Great unexpected contrast.

pretty good. love the last line. great imagery and flow. brilliant!

~mez~

wow awesome haiku much better than the ones i make :)

anyway good job i liked the way it looks like a raindrop, if you look at the way the text is shaped in general. Very nice haiku, except storm shouldnt be part of the haiku?

...well dont mind me im just a critic to everyone so no one likes my comments. Whatever, great job, i liked it anyway.

B*E*A*U*T*I*F*U*L*L*Y penned

aww i like this hiku its simple and its beautiful, i read it slowly and carefully and it made me feel like it was raining outside.. (even though its like 80 degrees here in san diego)