|Reviews for no title|
| tespep 11/12/05 . chapter 1
What about, "the way that I fill"?
| Moon-Chaser 11/3/05 . chapter 1
'Hateful Words' or 'Bleeding Pain'.
An emotional poem in just a few words, the shortness adds to the poem.
keep it up.
| Fate Defied 11/3/05 . chapter 1
short, but strong and powerful words spoken. Maybe the title "Hearing Your Words"? yeah i can see the picture in my mind.
trying showing your parents how much pain they're causing you by doing this. you shouldn't have to suffer on their behalf. but perhaps they don't understand? i don't know, i'm arguing with myself again. i hope you cope through this.