Aw, cute =]

When are you going to update? Soon please.

Hey. I wanted to say that i really think you have a good plot going. I love how sarcastic your main character is. i've always hated when authors make their protagonists one dimensional saints. I've been a longtime reader of your stories... under a different and completely prepubescent name. I think this story is what's going to make me regularly check fictionpress again.
thanks

aww that was so sweet... next chapter better come out soon!

YAY INTENSE CHAPTER

Great chapter. I guess I'll get used to the length, I'm just being whiny anyway. ;D

Some interesting (and important) stuff was revealed here. I loved it. Especially the ending, of course. ;) Keep up the good work!

Great chapter. i loved Jill taking care of him (again!), and the cheeky Lizard, and Colton's:
“Why can’t I just stay at your house forever?” he asked. “You make me happy.”
and he kissed her! Great writing. Please update soon.
and I loved Jill's 'rule your own life' speech.

ARE YOU SERIOUS?
YOU COMPLETELY LEFT IN ON A CLIFF HANGER!
i hate cliff hangers!!
im new to this site and i would like to say that this story does it for me! you MUST keep writing this story! please dont get tired and give it a shitty ending!

you are a really good writer and ill start reading your other stories but you HAVE to finish this, i have know idea where its going! woo,

you have talent!

Oh you! All you authors like to leave us readers hanging at the good parts :-P

No matter if you do it on propose or not.. IT'S STILL a CLIFFHANGER =D

Anyway, it was great!

Thumbs Up!!

This is totally awesome! I love it!

I can't wait for the next update. I love how Colton's so amazingly quirky. Just makes the break so much more exciting, don't you think?
I wish someone did that for me last spring break. man, I had the suckiest time.

And the new characters are cool. I especially like Lizard.

Main character's awesome, Billie's awesome. I can't wait to find out more about Jillian and about Colton. Even about her brother too!
I think I have an idea of what's so funny. . . haha!

Update soon, please.

Well, good to know that their history isn't *too* serious.

Great chapter, as always. Leaves me craving so much more, though. (The length isn't the longest I've seen.)

If the monster is Colton, I'm laughing my head off, not really surprised. He *would* crash a pool party just to be with Jill (in a bikini).

Can't wait to read more! :)

Oh.. cliff-hanger.
That's mean.. very mean of you, why do you do that to moi??
I love Colton alreadyy...=)

Holy crap, three years and still going, eh? WOOP WOOP! I love your story so much! i think i just fell in love with Colton...and I believe it's very posible you know; falling for one's character and all.

Okay, maybe not, but still, I encourage you to keep writing so I can know the ending of the story. lol. My friend and I really hate stories that are incomplete cuz it bothers us so much to have to wait. Patience is our most hated virtue.

I might just recommend this for her but then she'd slap me upside the head once I go to school and scold me for showing such a wonderful story to her when it's not finished. She hates suspense, especially since this chapter is a -G A S P- CLIFFHANGER!

She's such a whale penis: AKA dork. We cracked up when we discovered that dork actually meant whale penis until my cousin came up to us and said he had a dork of his own. -Insert eye twitching here- And now I'm blabbering and wasting precious time on trying to fufill the duty of updating my own stories.

Update whenever you can...however much that'll pain me. I'll keep a close eye on this!

Yours truly and hopefully without any dorks,

Miss Sadistic

Great writing. I missed Colton in this chapter as well, though it's nice to see some new characters. Please update soon. It should be interesting seeing whoever just crashed the party.

Cute chapter. Although I can't help wondering what the story between Colton and Jill's brother is about. Also, Colton's position when Jill woke up was really pushing some personal boundaries!

I'd love to try out a Japanese steakhouse - if I ever go somewhere where they have one. :/

Can't wait to read more! :)