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| Aryanda 2005-11-11 ch 1,   | Beautiful- simply and utterly amazing. It had such great imagery, and the word choice was jolly. Great job! |
| ayounggirlwhopaintedarainbo... 2005-11-07 ch 1, | this is really beautiful. There is so much imagery, i love it. Have you ever writen any songs/considered writing songs? i have a feeling that they would be amazing. But that's just a suggestion. Whatever you do never stop writing poetry, because the stuff that i have read is absolutly truly 100% wonderful!-Rosy |
| Queen of Boredom 2005-11-01 ch 1, | wow...beautiful...beautiful...wow... |
| xDistortedReALiTyx 2005-11-01 ch 1, | *happy sigh* This was great! I loved the imagery, and I know the feeling...I really relate...I especially liked the lines "Each note was a brand against my skin A rusted iron poker in my heart And the melody sang like the darkest angel. "They really stand out. Keep it up.--pammy-x3 |
| happypills03 2005-11-01 ch 1, | wowowowowowow... i so love this... it is great... it made me cry kinda.. |
| CheChe 2005-11-01 ch 1, | My roommate says: "Wow. And she's like... what? 14? Man. I think she has a future! I mean in that... just skip college and write poems for a living! And I'm thinking "college? she hasn't even gotten far with high school yet!" ;-) but seriously, THIS. IS. AMAZING. !. |
| Ajna 2005-11-01 ch 1, | Beautifully dark imagery. I absolutely love this. Very sad. |