Please trust me when I say that you are truly a creative writer. Your characters feel so uniquely real. What REALLY impressed me, beyond anything else, was how much I liked Jamie. It is so difficult to get someone to really LIKE the main character as a person, as a friend, to really LIKE her personality (especially through a first-person narrative), because everything is from her angle of view and it's as though the reader really IS the character -- and it's strange trying to befriend oneself. I enjoyed this story as though it were a book. There is so much lousy writing on this site and THIS deserves to stand out!

This was such a sweet story. Your language is really good. I love it. :)

Aw! ^_^ This is a very cute and well-written story. Great job.