Damn, that whole collection was gorgeous. Especially the two list ones - list format makes them roll off the tongue, it's really quite melodic.

Anyway, I'm sorry that I came in and commented on something so personal, but these were very nice anyway. Beautifully written, running a gamut of emotions... just, nice.

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I know it says fiction, but believe me, it's more like poetry.

I feel bad about reviewing personal things like this, but... hey, they're quite beautiful.

Okay. XD

That packed quite a punch for a few words.

Well done.

The way you use language is fantastic. It's very raw and fresh, just the way poetry ought to be.

I'm going to read the rest of this now.