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Reviews For: Edge of Worlds

Syrith Oruniah 2006-10-01 ch 16, anon.	abuseYoh! It's me... I think. :P Anyway, I think the one you posted isn't the finished version because there're "notes" there. They made me laugh... but uh, try to fix'em. :P "They’re nearly out of sight when Caledon sees them and shouts and Ebony is like SHITSHIT and they all take off running through the busy streets." "Tave swirls up and Ebony’s like That’s great RUN NOW TALK LATER."
573f4n 2006-04-19 ch 14,	abuseWhoot! It's updated! I'm elated! Wow. That's an on-the-spot rhyme. Anyway... Ebony's going soft? Oh. Keep up the good work!
573f4n 2006-04-16 ch 13,	abuseAH! That was a darn cliffie... :( Keep up the good work!
573f4n 2006-02-24 ch 12,	abuseI know that it's a bit late for this review but... you said that you've finished the story... right? Aw... that's a cliffie! Will you still post the remaining chappies?
Carmel 2006-01-12 ch 11, anon.	abuseK... so this chapter was... WONDERFUL. ^_^ The whole thing with the dragons was pretty great. I can see some kind of comedic things coming from the younger dragon... uh... Neslin. Though maybe that wasn't the direction you were going to take with him. shrugs It's such a pretty world. I want to live there and see unicorns and nightmares and dragons and jekla and and and... EVERYTHING. sigh Now I remember one of the reasons I love your stories so much... my head it filled to the brim with images.
Carmel 2006-01-11 ch 1, anon.	abuseOMG! I read the WHOLE thing... that you have posted anyways. WHERE'S THE REST OF IT?! I'm gonna die... I wanna know what happens! >_< And... and... sniff I'm sad about what happened at the end of the last chapter posted. You did such a good job at making Balroth a lovable and magical creature. Very majestic and full of pride in my mind. This story paints a very vivid picture for the reader. I was easily able to imagine the mythical alternate world that you created. I can't wait to see where you go with this story from here... I think that this one is a real gem among your most recent stories. ^_^
Mechanical Dolls 2005-12-13 ch 1,	abuseI'm glad I found your stories again. I've been reading 'Adrift' when I haven't made this account, and I find it kind of disappointing that you're not planning to update it (or are you?). Anyway, I've always loved the way you describe things. It's very pretty. And this prologue is so mythlike it's incredible. When the day came, nearly three thousand years after Morathi’s final words, an almost imperceptible change for which no one was prepared swept the land. Myths with any sort of magic felt the vague flux, felt the curl of new arrival in their bellies. On that day no winds blew and no waves rippled the glassy surface of any water. Life on Lian-giroth stilled, drifting slowly to a stop as the air was filled with a strange noise. It was a noise that had not been heard in millennia- a noise that, for the briefest moment, stopped the breath of all those who heard it. Everywhere, the phoenix lyrebirds were singing. This is my favorite part. Terrific ending! I would definately read more once I have the time. ~MD
mary 2005-12-07 ch 1, anon.	abuseplz plz plz! update!i love this story!
gurl with too much time 2005-11-26 ch 9, anon.	abusei really like this story! your a great writer.
Pandora blue-eyes 2005-11-20 ch 3,	abuseThis story is excellent. The way you describe everything is great. Haven't read all you've wrote yet but I will. Keep up the great work!
Laz 2005-11-18 ch 5, anon.	abuseThe review system...totally..like, ate my last review. facepalm Oh well. It's so good so far! You have half a month left, missy!
Varmint 2005-11-05 ch 1,	abuseE NaNoWriMo eKeep going!

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