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| sewmyselfshut 2006-03-26 ch 1,  | abuseWow. I really felt that. I am a huge fan of poetry, especially shakespeare, and for a free verse- i think it flowed great. I like that a lot. I really don't know what more you can improve on that, because it seemed it was just your emotions flowing out onto paper, and i dont really want to criticize that. Thanks for reviewing my story, i was beginning to think no one would ever read it and like it. Most of the people who read it thought it was way too predictable and lovey-dovey so i was getting frustrated. Thanks for your comment though. it really helped me out. :] Thanks again-Caitlin |
| Neverlander12 2006-03-20 ch 1, | abuseOne word: awe.Freakin A.I hate you in that "I love you and am seriously insanely jealous of your mad poem skills" kind of way.*rolls eyes* another good one.Brafreakinvo *grins* seriously though- excellent Smooches-CGUll_the_Wizpig |
| Smoky Bear 2005-12-08 ch 1, | abusevery inspired... and a spooky memory... my friend's 7 year old niece remembers henry the 8th... love the way you've entwined all the themes |
| Theory Of The 4th Dimension 2005-11-06 ch 1, | abuseHey...this wasn't bad, the format is a bit messy though, but I can still follow through. Demon Strean, cute title, I really appreciated the longings of one's old childhood memories in this, its something most people lay back on when finishing a stressful day. |