|Reviews for Forgotten Pains|
| David deHaas 9/9/10 . chapter 1
flowed very nicely, good job
| WinterDeity 3/10/06 . chapter 1
aww...you have a knack for poetry, i can tell! Scars...scars are always bad. you keep with the rhyme scheme well. i'm jumping from topic to topic aren't I? Um...keep up the good work! *tilts head to one side* hm...i guess i can just say I loved it! making people everywhere feel sane, Winter
| natasha 2/6/06 . chapter 1
Again- wow! This one was- I don't know...I don't wanna say better than the first...it has different feelings that it conveys. It was great...really loved it. I actually got a little teary!
| FunkyFlower 12/9/05 . chapter 1
cool ending. love the rhyming as always. ur flow is perfect and the wordings fantastic! another great poem,
| LoveAlways05 11/28/05 . chapter 1
I'm glad you posted this poem cause it was really really good! the flow of it was awsome!
| 1138 11/8/05 . chapter 1
Interesting. I liked it!
| les petits bateaux 11/7/05 . chapter 1
You do know that you are a very talented poet? I love the play of emotions in this, and the ending which was really good. You have a real flair for poetry. Really excellent.
| boundtobreak 11/3/05 . chapter 1
WOW, this was excellent Hayley.I loved the rhyming it all flowed very up the good work and KW.
| kawaii -kitty-kitty 11/2/05 . chapter 1
it's realy really GOOD!:)
| silentscreamer07 11/2/05 . chapter 1
wow...this was amazing. Not only did you chose awesome wordings, but there's def. alot of feeling behind it. And i think that helps it have more meaning. I know how it feels to post a more personal poem, that you dont really wanna post, yet, you do. Ive posted some like that. Ne ways. I loved this, and i hope everything is okay. *smiles* *kw* I really like everything you've written so far! Hope to see ya soon! i havent in weeks! George
| Ang-Dev 11/2/05 . chapter 1
*sighs*...this is just so incredibly beautifully written! i LOVE this poem and the rhyme scheme is amazing. i can only say, that this is DEFINITELY going on our favs and u better keep writing lol. great job, mez
| Princess-anna57 11/1/05 . chapter 1
Aw! Sad, yet well written! Write on!
| gummibared 11/1/05 . chapter 1
About a girl 'who's name I won't mention', who lied to all her friends including me, and then moved away without even saying goodbye :(