flowed very nicely, good job

aww...you have a knack for poetry, i can tell! Scars...scars are always bad. you keep with the rhyme scheme well. i'm jumping from topic to topic aren't I? Um...keep up the good work! *tilts head to one side* hm...i guess i can just say I loved it! making people everywhere feel sane, Winter

Again- wow! This one was- I don't know...I don't wanna say better than the first...it has different feelings that it conveys. It was great...really loved it. I actually got a little teary!

cool ending. love the rhyming as always. ur flow is perfect and the wordings fantastic! another great poem,

mez

I'm glad you posted this poem cause it was really really good! the flow of it was awsome!

Interesting. I liked it!

You do know that you are a very talented poet? I love the play of emotions in this, and the ending which was really good. You have a real flair for poetry. Really excellent.

Trinity

WOW, this was excellent Hayley.I loved the rhyming it all flowed very up the good work and KW.

it's realy really GOOD!:)

wow...this was amazing. Not only did you chose awesome wordings, but there's def. alot of feeling behind it. And i think that helps it have more meaning. I know how it feels to post a more personal poem, that you dont really wanna post, yet, you do. Ive posted some like that. Ne ways. I loved this, and i hope everything is okay. *smiles* *kw* I really like everything you've written so far! Hope to see ya soon! i havent in weeks! George

*sighs*...this is just so incredibly beautifully written! i LOVE this poem and the rhyme scheme is amazing. i can only say, that this is DEFINITELY going on our favs and u better keep writing lol. great job, mez

Aw! Sad, yet well written! Write on!

Anna

About a girl 'who's name I won't mention', who lied to all her friends including me, and then moved away without even saying goodbye :(