random, probably full of personal references and symbolism.

i like the third piece most out of the three pieces here although each one has its own unique qualities. i like the way you've imbued meaning into simple observations..do keep writing :D

Wow... More and more, your poems are getting abstract. I mean, I used to be able to fully comprehend all the angles and dimensions of your poems before, because they were all laid out clear to me. Now, it's getting harder and harder for me to see all the layers, and I need to think and analyse a bit, but they still come out as a beautiful as ever. SOmehow, even when you dont fully understand it, there's still such a touch of, i dunno, something, that strikes a chord in one's heart. I like this.